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o . Break Free . o by ~suka:iconsuka:


©2004-2009 ~suka
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Fullview please!

If you’re wondering where I got the title from, it was from a song that’s back in the late 80’s early 90’s or something.. Song is called “[If You] Hold on for One More Day”. Beautiful to listen to if you’ve ever had a heartbreak.

Okay so after being lazy for 3 days working on it, I finished it. I wanted to draw Nase many months ago, but then I didn’t feel like it afterwards, but I did so anyway because KL’s birthday had passed. Plus I wanted to have something to do. Some of the proportions are off. The tree looks flat. The wood she’s sitting on has no tree rings, I know. I don’t know how to do them for one thing. The sky looks quirky but I was trying to go for a different style. The grass stalks don’t look like there’s many, but there are. The mountain in the back looks as if it’s nearby and not far away O.o; And the walls oh what do you call them the bottom brown part is too short and should be tall up to an adult’s waist She’s probably supposed to be darker than she is because she’s under the roof of her house, but I made her as dark as can be without tanning her. Her eyes are far apart, and I like them that way. Get over it. And there are more flaws but I don’t feel like naming them all. Well, hope KL-chan likes it ^^

Tell me what you think!

Nase © KL-chan
Image © me

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:iconladylaguna:
Wonderful work on the coloring as always ^^ I love the character, especially the way you did her cute little ears! Great design. The birds and feathers swirling about are great; they really add interest to the piece. The background looks lovely and it's a great setting. The only thing that throws it off is the landing and steps she's sitting on; the perspective is a bit forced. I should be more foreshortened and you shouldn't be able to see so much surface area.

Though I know I'm no expert in perspective :P I have a LOT to learn myself.

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:icondcballer:
I'm digging the coloring here; a nice mix of hard and soft shading. The background looks nice and serene, with the blur creating a nice contrast with the foreground. I agree that the perspective on the deck doesn't really match up with the character or ground, but it still looks nicely drawn. The character itself is cute with an interesting and well done pose, and the birds are looking great as well. It's all good. :thumbsup:

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:iconkarma-monkey:
This is soooo cuuuute! I especially luv her eyes tho

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UWAAAAAH~!!! *dies* This is so so pretty~ I love the birds, and the pose and the expression ToT I'm sure KL-san will love it x.x *worshipglomp* Favorite for me~ Great job ToT

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:iconhanaurimusume:
The way the birds are coming from where the viewer is looking is done nicely! Congrats! ^^
The character is adorable, and i love the way you did her ears.

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:iconmichirumakichi:
You made Nyanko so cute!!! *__*!! Love the CG! D:D~ :D

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:iconlemontea:
Cute, very well coloured :) Looks nice indeed.

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:iconjazz-chan:
lovely coloring x3 ah wanna eat the birds lol

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