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Wow, this took a while to do. Worked on this on and off, took a week break from it, and pretty much procrastinated on it. Got many helpful critiques on it at CA. This is Finfy's ray character, Rachel, done as a trade. I tried the lineless art technique using Yumedust's tutorial as reference. I used many references such as hands, posture, etc. to get it to look right. I'm not too good on fish and all those underwater creatures, so they look all weird and had to use reference to get it to look right.

Critiques and honest opinions are always more than welcome.

Rachel (C) Finfy
image by me

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:iconlionessblackfire:
This is very cool. Her face and the water above them (where the sky would usually be) seem particularily well-done. The aqua tint of the glowing parts seems to really help express that these characters are, in fact, underwater.

The one thing I have to critique is that I'm not sure what that thing coming off the girl's backside is. It's the same color as her garments, so I assume it's part of that, but, is it a bow? Something else? I'm not quite sure.

Overall, though, I really like this picture! Great job!
:iconfinfy:
oh wow you did it so awsome!
mine is aganst this a doodle xD
i lik eyour so much! wow so awsome!
cant find words :O
:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: x100000000000000

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i love you Tracy the Cat x3
:iconfinfy:
oh wow you did it so awsome!
mine is aganst this a doodle xD
i lik eyour so much! wow so awsome!
cant find words :O
:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: x100000000000000

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i love you Tracy the Cat x3
:iconsuka:
The green part on the back of her is supposed to be the back of a ray's body that connects with the tail.
:iconpoofypajamapants:
Seems rather...stunning to look at.

As for critique...I don't know what to say...cause I can't really find anything wrong @_@ Nor do I have anything to help you improve.

Though, is that one fish by the Rachel's hand behind her, in the background, or is it just small?

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Robotic Zombies love sex.
:iconamsay:
wow, brilliantly designed. I love the lighting. you have a real knack for art.

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:shakefist: for once in your life stop thinking about what others want and do what you want. It is your life and no one else but you should face the consequences of your actions :hug:
:iconsuka:
Yeah, that's a fish. And those little dotty things in the background are fish and sea creatures as well. :nod:
:iconpoofypajamapants:
No, I meant if that fish was in the background or close to the character o.o

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Robotic Zombies love sex.
:iconsuka:
Oh, it's supposed to be close to her ^^;

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July 12, 2007
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